www: the page numbers? ebi: the layout. the headline.columns, colour scheme, enlarged quote???? standfirst. have you even looked at a DPS. This is a fail!
much much better Mary. www: great headline design and the image is fine. ebi: the layout of the columns. need to have that halfway gutter. the sub image is not necessary. needs a proper standfirst.
www: the page numbers?
ReplyDeleteebi: the layout. the headline.columns, colour scheme, enlarged quote???? standfirst. have you even looked at a DPS. This is a fail!
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much much better Mary.
ReplyDeletewww: great headline design and the image is fine.
ebi: the layout of the columns. need to have that halfway gutter. the sub image is not necessary. needs a proper standfirst.
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